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Leanne <3
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0 posted 04-24-2009 09:56 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Leanne <3


I feel it all slipping away
Slipping through my fingers,
Gripping at the cool air
In which your spirit lingers.

My memory is beginning to fade
You’re but a silhouette in my mind,
The finer features disappearing
Screaming to be refined.

I can only just remember
The last time I saw your face,
The confusion in your eyes
Set you in a different place.

Now all I have is your photo
Tucked safe inside my purse,
It helps me through the pain
of seeing your shiny hearse.

Do you hear my voice at night?
As I talk to my bedroom ceiling,
Telling you all my fears and dreams
While my spirit begins it’s healing.

I know you’re not here today
To share this life with me,
But I hear your voice in the breeze
And your heartbeat in the sea.

Your love’s forever around me
Looking after my soul;
It guides me through the dark
And returns me heart to whole.

Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved…there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years – Thomas Har

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1 posted 04-24-2009 11:40 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Sorry for you loss. Good write.
XxForever.BrokenxX
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2 posted 04-26-2009 09:22 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

This is a really good write,
and i know Exactly how you feel.

  
Stay strong,

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
   {~~*~~}

Falling rain
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3 posted 04-27-2009 04:54 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Very good poem. Sounds like something I would write. Keep writing hon. Sorry for your loss.

-Zach

We all flirt with the tiniest notion of self-conclusion in one simple motion.  

Leanne <3
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4 posted 04-28-2009 03:26 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

thank you all for your comments
im glad you enjoyed it.
xx
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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5 posted 05-15-2009 01:02 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

i absolutly love this. there's just something about it that seems really familiar, i just can't point it out.
great job on this.
library.

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

nehematala
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6 posted 05-21-2009 04:52 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

this poem really hits home. Its a really good one though

If you don't like something,
Change it...
If you can't change it,
Change the way you think about it

Zaineb
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7 posted 05-22-2009 10:17 AM       View Profile for Zaineb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zaineb

It is really good, you can understand the pain and it is impossible to ignore, because it seem so familiar that you just want to read more of it.
kindredspirit
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8 posted 06-08-2009 04:30 PM       View Profile for kindredspirit   Email kindredspirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kindredspirit

well written, intense, and touching.
 
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