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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2009-04-23 03:01 AM



Photobucket

Hey there pretty girl
With eyes so bright and blue
with mummy's nose and daddy's smile
Don't forget that i love you

_____________________

Choked up by these stupid tears
How the hell do i get by
Another night, another town
I dont' have the strength to cry

God tell me why i'm running
Because right now i'm not so sure
trapped by the decisions that i've made
I lay broken on this floor

This isn't what i signed up for
I'm tired of living in this sin
Why is life so god darn hard
Cause i'm so close to giving in

But there's crying in the other room
As i wipe the tears from my tired face
I see her peeking through the cot rails
My gorgeous saving grace

___________________________

Hey there pretty girl
With eyes so bright and blue
In your dotty little green dress
You'll help mummy make it through

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shattered-smiles
Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247
inside the shadows
1 posted 2009-04-23 08:27 AM


Oh my!  She's adorable!!  That is the cutest picture I have seen in a long time.  She is going to be one beautiful girl when she's growing up, wow.

my knuckles have turned to white, there's no turning back tonight ----- kiss me one last time [shut your eyes]

Falling rain
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since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois
2 posted 2009-04-23 12:51 PM


She's gonna be a heartbreaker when she's older Jess. lol. Simply gorgeous child you have there!

-Zach

We all flirt with the tiniest notion of self-conclusion in one simple motion.  

Rosie_Orange
Junior Member
since 2009-04-20
Posts 46
South Africa
3 posted 2009-04-23 01:29 PM


its a bit cliched but otherwise i really like it... and the baby is soooo cute!!
XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
4 posted 2009-04-23 08:00 PM


Keep hanging in there Jess.
luv ya,
Em

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
   {~~*~~}


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