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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 04-19-2009 02:52 AM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX


I Am restless and weak
I wonder who really cares
I Hear nothing but silence
I see into the darkness
I want truth from these lyrics
I am restless and weak
I pretend everything's fine
I feel empty inside
I touch frigid air around me
I worry that tomorrow she'll be gone
I cry because this pressure is too much
I am restless and weak
I understand you're hurting
I say it all the time
I dream of happy endings
I try to be strong
I hope dreams come true
I am restless and weak

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Fill in the blanks:

I Am (two characteristics)_____________.
I wonder (what you actually wonder)________.
I Hear (whatever you just heard)___________.
I see (what you see)___________________.
I want(whatever you like,be random!)______.
I am (restate the begining of the poem)_____.
I pretend (everybody pretends,What do you?)_____.
I feel (what do you feel?)____________________.
I touch (what you just touched)________________.
I worry (what your worried about)______________.
I cry (why you cry and not) __________________________.
I am___________________________________.
I understand (what you understand)_______________.
I say (what do you say alot)___________________.
I dream (what you dream of)__________________.
I try (what you try to do)_______________________.
I hope (what you hope everyday)________________.
I am ____________________________________.

Emmalee Janelle
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1 posted 04-19-2009 05:14 AM       View Profile for moonbeam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonbeam

Nice idea Emily - Now try taking it away from yourself a bit like this:

I am a plain earthernware vase glazed in stippled sage
I wonder when I will crack
I hear the swish of my lady's gown as she passes
I see her porcelain fingers arrange fresh freishas
I want to be fine Ming for a day
I am a plain earthernware vase glazed in stippled sage
I pretend I can succour these flowers for ever
I feel the soft scrape of bleeding stems
I touch people with my fountain of colour
I worry that my waters will run dry
I cry when the freishas are pale and perfumeless
I am a plain earthernware vase glazed in stippled sage
I understand the pain of separation
I say everything with flowers
I dream of draping my curves in silk
I try to stay in the background
I hope for my lady's touch and the blessing of fresh water
I am a plain earthernware vase glazed in stippled sage

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2 posted 04-19-2009 05:43 AM       View Profile for punkrockerrobin   Email punkrockerrobin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit punkrockerrobin's Home Page   View IP for punkrockerrobin

VERY AWESOME I WILL HAVE TO TRY THAT

I'm lost and going nowhere i need help to find my way

GothicCherry
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3 posted 04-20-2009 09:03 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

HaHa!! Ironic...I just did one of these for my English teacher not long ago...
freeand2sexy
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4 posted 04-20-2009 01:35 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I had to write one of these in my AP Spanish class. I might try it again, but this time in English.

"Do you smell it? That smell. A kind of smelly smell.
The smelly smell that smells... smelly." -Mr. Krabs

Suncleaver
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5 posted 04-21-2009 05:28 AM       View Profile for Suncleaver   Email Suncleaver   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suncleaver

Nicely done Emily.

It's been eight years since I've seen one of these.
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