Pretty catchy meter, and a good strong message too. In my head when I read this my mind is dying to put it to music - would make great lyrics. I can just see Dire Straits doing it; but then I bet you don't remember them .
you're such an amazing poet... i really like this poem, the way your rhyming doesn't make it sound babyish but rather assists in making the poem better.. and i agree, i think it would make an amazing song!! (: