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My Stars

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Revolve.K.A
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0 posted 04-12-2009 11:52 PM       View Profile for Revolve.K.A   Email Revolve.K.A   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Revolve.K.A


I want to see the stars again.
I miss them very much.
So close that you could hear them speak,
So close that you could touch.

They told me stories of yesteryears,
As I lay and look above.
Of hope, despair, truth and lies,
Stories of precious love;

But they told me that a star,
As old as they can be;
That they can look back down at us,
And this is what they see:

Even though in times of war,
There is that speck of light.
That spark of love, how big or small,
Shinning boldly bright;

The lights of love shine back on them,
Showing one inch of hope:
That even how sick the world may be,
One day weíll learn to cope.

And so they would shine every night.
Just to show us all,
No matter how hard you get knocked down.
Brush off and stand up tall.

Iíll have my stars, they love me back.
Something you never could do.
Iíll stick with them, say my prayers.
And say good bye to you.

I havenít seen the stars
For almost a half a week.
They do not shine at all at night.
Not even a little peek.

I wish they would come back again.
And help me through the night.
Light up the summer sky,
With a shinning wishful light.

Since you left, the stars have gone
And left me laying here.
All by myself, alone at last,
Wondering when they would appear.

Thatís when I began to realize,
What it was all about.
I didnít believe it all at firstÖ
But really there was no doubt.

I loved you almost as much as the stars,
And without that theyíre gone,
Disappeared with out a trace
All hope of love withdrawn.

Iím not ready to get up again,
And hold my head up tall.
The risk of being broken,
And in fear that I may fall.

I want to have my stars back.
To get me through the day
To wish me good luck and tell me good night
And promise that theyíll stay.

But until they come back again,
I guess Iíll have to resist.
And wish upon a shooting star
That no longer does exist.  

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RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 04-13-2009 09:46 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Firslt.. WELCOME TO PIP!...

I hope you enjoy your time here..

LOVELY first post!

Very Talented.. WELL DONE!
soul_wandering
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2 posted 04-14-2009 05:40 AM       View Profile for soul_wandering   Email soul_wandering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for soul_wandering

Awesome!
Even i love looking at stars..
freeand2sexy
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3 posted 04-14-2009 04:28 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Welcome to pip!!!

Nice write!

"I can't see my forehead!" -Patrick

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4 posted 05-06-2009 04:09 PM       View Profile for KeyLimeSorbet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KeyLimeSorbet

Welcome to PIP, i think your poetry is going to be a great addition to the forums here!
Look forward to seeing more of your work!
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5 posted 05-09-2009 10:41 AM       View Profile for moonbeam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonbeam

Welcome to Passions

It's great to see you posting here .   I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses.  Hopefully we can all learn and enjoy together.  (Please check your e-mail for a special greeting).

All the best.

Rob - Moderator/Passions in Poetry
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