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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 04-12-2009 11:44 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

I'm left with the pain,
of knowing you're gone.
I have nothing left...
nothing left to live for.
Where will this leave me?
I don't know anymore,
I simply don't k n o w.
This knowledge of being sane
has left my living soul.
It was erased with the thought
of how you dissapeared.
Clutching the air before me,
for someone to hold my hand...
for someone to love me.
But I know that's a lie,
you were all I had left.

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

© Copyright 2009 Julianna - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 04-13-2009 09:45 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Argh... this is so good..
it hurts me to read it.. cause i feel like this everyday!!.. it's insaine.. i know exactly how u feel..

AMAZING!
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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2 posted 04-13-2009 09:54 AM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

thanks so much

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

Suncleaver
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3 posted 04-13-2009 01:29 PM       View Profile for Suncleaver   Email Suncleaver   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suncleaver

Another beautiful heartrender.

Your free-writes keep getting better Julianna.
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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4 posted 04-13-2009 02:18 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

thanks luke. i'm glad you see that

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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5 posted 04-14-2009 03:03 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Aww hon. You know how much this poem prolly means. Because I know that everyone has felt this at least once in their life. Keep up the writing please

-Zach

We all flirt with the tiniest notion of self-conclusion in one simple motion.  

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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haha, i will zach. don't you worry about that one

julianna

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