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To my One and Only, whoever he may be.

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freeand2sexy
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(Meant to be read slowly)


We know what this is

Bubbling, and you know what it is.
Shaking, your nerves start to twitch.
It leaps from one moment to the next.
It's all around me, and I sense it.

Thinking…thinking…
Yet without those…huh?
Yeah, those thoughts.
Distracted, by screaming,
Shouting,
I hear you, stop yelling,
I know what it is.

A jolt, a push and a shove.
It quakes my life
It's, it's…
Yes, I know what it is.

Fluttering, you know what it means.
Soothing, you can't move, anything.
It's never what it seems, is it?
Is it meant to fill me like this?

Breathing…but barely,
As I'm sinking,
Sinking…
Until there's nothing,
But everything,
You.

Our finger tips touch,
Our eyes,
Reveal it all.
Breathing...breathing...
Then our lips…

We know what this is.

"I can't see my forehead!" -Patrick

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1 posted 04-10-2009 11:03 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I really like this. It does sound better when you read it slow. Very good.

-Zach

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freeand2sexy
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2 posted 04-10-2009 03:44 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Thank you, when I wrote at 1 in the morning, I really liked it, now not so much. I think it's okay, but not as good as I thought it was.

"I can't see my forehead!" -Patrick

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3 posted 04-20-2009 08:55 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

You have some of the weirdest quotes as signatures lol

I honestly loved this!! Nothing about it seemed boring to me. Loved it absolutely loved it lol lol Sorry, hyper...
freeand2sexy
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4 posted 04-20-2009 01:07 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

lol, thanks!!!

Yeah the quotes are kinda weird

"Do you smell it? That smell. A kind of smelly smell.
The smelly smell that smells... smelly." -Mr. Krabs

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