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lost in life

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sez22
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0 posted 04-09-2009 01:26 AM       View Profile for sez22   Email sez22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sez22


i dont know what to say
or even what to do,
i cant make my mind up
im stuck here just like glue

i know i should be better
i know i should be strong
but finding myself again
is something i do wrong

i got lost a while back
and cant find my way home
it all comes down to daddy
who left me all alone.

I dont know what to say to him
he hert my family so
to just go back in time
to change these things i know

i wish you never said those things
i wish you stayed around
insted you went of with her
and your own little croud

but who cares about us
dad you sucked the life out of me
you ruined my life and left this mess
what is it that you cant see

you say dont worry things will be better
but no they just get worse
your all wrapped up in your world
you dont care what we verse

i wish you understood
i wish you wernt so mad
i want to say im sorry
i want you to be glad

i try to understand you
but i cant do that
you never explained these things
and so its left to me.


for everyone my dad left my mum to be with a girl who is 4 years older than me i hate her and i dont get along with my dad and im trying to let myself express how i feel coments please as to how to do this properly

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1 posted 04-09-2009 09:24 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

welcome to pip...

I'm sorry to hear what your dad did...

this is painful to read...

I would say some things to make you feel better, but I know they are just words and won't heal your hurt as I wish them to.

expressing yourself through poetry is a good start, no matter how you write...
it's good that you are letting it out in a positive manner. Please know that there are people here who have been through similar things, and we do care.

Keep spilling it on paper, let your emotions out...

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