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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 04-06-2009 06:17 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

Walking down this busy hallway
all I see is your eyes in mine.
Smoldering love is whats brewing,
an interlock of hands brings me to you.

"I want to know you more..."
is all you needed to say to start us.
How could I be so lucky
to have you in my life?

Feet shuffling along the floor,
as I skip to your side.
Slowly but surely this dance begins,
and all I see is the love in your eyes.

Here we are now,
dancing in the deadbeat mall,
under the light of the bright flourescents,
a twitch of our lips brings us together.

"So are you two official yet?"
is such an understatement to how we are.
The way your arm wraps around my waist,
whenever I shiver from the cold...

The way you always know whats wrong
before you even hear my voice.
It's all so wonderful,
how can it be real?

The fact is its not...
just another knock on the door
and this dream of love ends,
while I wait for another one to begin.

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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Suncleaver
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1 posted 04-06-2009 06:21 PM       View Profile for Suncleaver   Email Suncleaver   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suncleaver

I really enjoyed this Julianna. We all dream of love, but if you keep dreaming it will come true.

When I see your face all the angels are shamed.

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2 posted 04-06-2009 06:49 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Ahh! love this!!! Library for sure!!
lol
-Zach

We all flirt with the tiniest notion of self-conclusion in one simple motion.  

RevengeIsMine
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3 posted 04-07-2009 02:26 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Love this Julianna. It's amazing.. and so true.. but as ppl keep telling me.. It's better to have loved and lost... than never to have loved at all!!
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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4 posted 04-07-2009 12:45 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

thanks so much luke, zach, and jess i'm glad you liked it...

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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