???? (eh, I was seriously bored)

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Teen Poetry #9

???? (eh, I was seriously bored)

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

0 posted 2009-04-05 10:23 PM

Take love,
And throw it down the drain.
It's hate
That overcomes this pain.
I know
Exactly what you'll say.
Shut up!
I'm doing it my way!

I'll hide my freedom
And ruuuuun…
Slip down the steady slops
Of my imagination

Spell a different song
Cuz I'm tired of the same
OLD
CapITaLizTIoN

Forget theRigid Rules
Of life
And living

I'll city you OUT of your
Own run

FUDGE these
BROWNIES!

The lives YOU live
are alllllllllllll…
OVERDONE

HeLLo?!
you passed perfect

Sry if you can't work it
LiKe me!
!LIVING!
In the SLUMPS of
my own cItY

You COOkie DOUgh
cutter?!?!

Stuuck in the
world's GuTTeR

While my life's here
with Out the Fear
That we;re
O1N1E in theSame

Cuz I'm DIFerENT

I’m doing it MY way
playing my own game

jus UNCONVENTIONAL

!<3!Get Over It!:^)!

"I can't see my forehead!" -Patrick

[This message has been edited by freeand2sexy (04-06-2009 12:27 PM).]

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2009-04-05 11:53 PM

WOW.. i love it..
Great Write!!
xx

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2009-04-06 08:07 AM

Lol!!! Wowwww... This was very interesting to ready...
Cookie cutter?? lmfao.

Nice.

-Zach

We all flirt with the tiniest notion of self-conclusion in one simple motion.

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

3 posted 2009-04-06 08:19 AM

HaHaHa!! Sooo funn

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

4 posted 2009-04-06 12:25 PM

Thanks guys, I wasn't sure what you would think of it, but I guess you guys liked it.

"I can't see my forehead!" -Patrick

Kalysta
Junior Member

since 2009-04-02

Posts 41
Ohio

5 posted 2009-04-08 05:48 PM

I liked this. Its cool. lol. I was laughing the whole time i was reading it. Great poem!
~Kalysta~

~Kalysta~

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

6 posted 2009-04-08 08:57 PM

Thank you!!!

"I can't see my forehead!" -Patrick

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