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GUITAR . Pictures, Images and Photos

What are the slight chances
To try again and roll the dice?
Play ever card I hold in my hand
To risk it all for a price

How many times do I have to try
To climb all the way to the top?
Forever scaling that social latter
'Till I find a reason to stop

Always finding myself wondering
Why am I at the bottom of this chain?
Is it because I don't have the cash?
What is it that I have to obtain?

Do I not have a magical spark?
To match the flashy clothes they wear
Simple middle class wealth I hold
All my flaws exposed leaving me bare

Suburban houses is all I've seen
High dreams too simple to the rich
How I wish at night for something more
But lives just can't be switched
© Copyright 2009 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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zach this is really good. i can't believe no one's posted anything. i love it, the flow of it was really well and it was easy to read. great job
library.

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

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well i was gunna say something along the lines of what Julianna said but im like, nah, that's lame to have to read two comments that say the same thing. So then i thought of this shirt i have that has this awesome quote on it.
It says summin' like..

"To the world you may be one person,
But to one person you may be the world"

Great write,

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
   {~~*~~}

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3 posted 04-08-2009 05:55 PM       View Profile for Kalysta   Email Kalysta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kalysta

Hey I really liked this. I'm new at the whole wrighting poems thing, but I can tell a good poem when I see one, and yours was amazing! Awesome write!!
  
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~Kalysta~

 
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