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Sympathy For Mr Vengence?, We Try But We Don't Belong!!

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RevengeIsMine
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Australia


0 posted 04-04-2009 08:48 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Hi Guys.. haven't really posted in a while except for my dark post a while back "Acid Rain, Stiching the affliction" So a week n a bit ago i left my fiance. things just weren't working.. it got to the stage where he was seeing another woman, he wouldn't be in the same room as our daughter.. it broke me, cause i still love him so much. and i hope one day he can love me again. so this poem is about loving somebody so much and through all the bad you stil hold on to hope that they won't forget you and one day they'll come back for you..
I won't be able to post much unfortunatly i'm currently living in a hotel and travelling with Amelia.. but hopefully i'll find some place to settle down..

The picture is also a real picture of the bedroom wall i so kindly re decorated over a period of time before i left..

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My tears are burned in the hallway wall
These memories shoud not be yours at all
You had your shot but you tore me down
You left me bleeding in this town

There were no tears, no saving grace
You watched that blood dry on my face
And every punch it hurt like hell
But you clung to hope that i wouldnt tell

There are so many things I need to say
Tell me why did it end this way?
Why did you choose her over me?
Was she all the things Iíll never be?

Iíve got it all figured out in my head
Got a bag packed on my bed
I donít need directions nor a map
If we get lost I'll be cool with that

The car radioís playing our favourite song
The one where the wife and husband get along
I wind down the window and throw the ring
There is no love story left to sing

But i burned my memory on the wall
If only you hadnít left me at all
With a message written for all to see
Donít you dare forget to remember me....


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Falling rain
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Small town, Illinois


1 posted 04-04-2009 05:15 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

You had me at tears at the end of this poem hon. I'm sorry you had to go through this. But I'm going through something like this as well. Hope all goes well. Send Amelia my love.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 01-20-2008
Posts 887
Neverland


2 posted 04-05-2009 12:06 AM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Oh Jess.
I don't even know what I can say..
there are a million things that are running through my mind of what i should say..but somehow i feel it wont make a difference..
so, i guess these are the best words i can come up with, even tho i've said them before.

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If you feel like you're alone,
and you just can't get through;
look up at the stars and know,
I'm thinking of you.
I know it's not much of a promise,
but my heart wont ever lie.
Just look a little closer
to the foggy midnight sky.

The moon wonít turn her back,
the stars shine just for you.
Don't give up on today,
You can make it through.

Trust with all your heart,
Donít let clouds get you down,
Look up to the sky;
Please rid of that frown.


luv ya hun.
i'll be thinking of you.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
   {~~*~~}

I am the arch angel
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since 02-02-2008
Posts 169
nowhere,illinois,USA


3 posted 04-13-2009 01:12 PM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for I am the arch angel

wow jess i really liked it... i miss you like crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   please get on again.  Much love


keagan
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since 07-29-2008
Posts 188
Highlands, Scotland.


4 posted 04-13-2009 05:56 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Octave

You have an amazing gift of getting your point across in the most simple yet beautiful way. Be strong. You poetry is amazing and just don't give up.
 
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