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Sympathy For Mr Vengence?, We Try But We Don't Belong!!
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Sympathy For Mr Vengence?, We Try But We Don't Belong!! |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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Hi Guys.. haven't really posted in a while except for my dark post a while back "Acid Rain, Stiching the affliction" So a week n a bit ago i left my fiance. things just weren't working.. it got to the stage where he was seeing another woman, he wouldn't be in the same room as our daughter.. it broke me, cause i still love him so much. and i hope one day he can love me again. so this poem is about loving somebody so much and through all the bad you stil hold on to hope that they won't forget you and one day they'll come back for you.. I won't be able to post much unfortunatly i'm currently living in a hotel and travelling with Amelia.. but hopefully i'll find some place to settle down.. The picture is also a real picture of the bedroom wall i so kindly re decorated over a period of time before i left.. _________________________________________________  My tears are burned in the hallway wall These memories shoud not be yours at all You had your shot but you tore me down You left me bleeding in this town There were no tears, no saving grace You watched that blood dry on my face And every punch it hurt like hell But you clung to hope that i wouldnt tell There are so many things I need to say Tell me why did it end this way? Why did you choose her over me? Was she all the things I’ll never be? I’ve got it all figured out in my head Got a bag packed on my bed I don’t need directions nor a map If we get lost I'll be cool with that The car radio’s playing our favourite song The one where the wife and husband get along I wind down the window and throw the ring There is no love story left to sing But i burned my memory on the wall If only you hadn’t left me at all With a message written for all to see Don’t you dare forget to remember me.... |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
You had me at tears at the end of this poem hon. I'm sorry you had to go through this. But I'm going through something like this as well. Hope all goes well. Send Amelia my love.  -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Oh Jess.  I don't even know what I can say.. there are a million things that are running through my mind of what i should say..but somehow i feel it wont make a difference.. so, i guess these are the best words i can come up with, even tho i've said them before. _____________________ If you feel like you're alone, and you just can't get through; look up at the stars and know, I'm thinking of you. I know it's not much of a promise, but my heart wont ever lie. Just look a little closer to the foggy midnight sky. The moon won’t turn her back, the stars shine just for you. Don't give up on today, You can make it through. Trust with all your heart, Don’t let clouds get you down, Look up to the sky; Please rid of that frown. luv ya hun. i'll be thinking of you. {~~*~~} Emmalee Janelle |
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I am the arch angel Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167nowhere,illinois,USA |
wow jess i really liked it... i miss you like crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please get on again. Much love keagan |
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Octave Member
since 2008-07-29
Posts 186Highlands, Scotland. |
You have an amazing gift of getting your point across in the most simple yet beautiful way. Be strong. You poetry is amazing and just don't give up. |
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