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XxForever.BrokenxX
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Kiss the rain so that,
I might fall in love
with you,
forever.
The rain,
it shows all my tears,
the tears that i've cried,
that i've shed for you,
my love.
Show me why they fall like rain,
and tell me why I can't stop the pain.
My love,
love hurts like the stars
that burn with a smile,
on winter nights so cold.

And when all the light goes dark,
remember this my love;
My tears, they fall like rain,
on a starry night.

Because of you,
Tears will fall as rain,
and now
I know, that I can love you
The rain, it falls on your face,
it falls with such grace,
and the stars are shining bright.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
   {~~*~~}

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this is beautiful....
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I really like this, it's amazing.

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This is very beautiful and has a stark, wintery romance to it.

Love hurts Emily, I know. I've just been hurt deeply by the one I love, so this beautiful poem struck a chord in me.

In these lonely halls no moon will weep, no sun will shine.
In these narrow rooms no tears are seen, no laughter heard!

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4 posted 04-03-2009 12:49 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I was thinking of Love Hurts by Yiruma when I was reading this. This poem is very beautiful and I can connect pretty well.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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yeah, actually when i wrote it i was listening to that song...so it's kinda like the words to it i guess....it works with the melody.
Thanks for reading.

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Emmalee Janelle
   {~~*~~}

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i really loved it
XxForever.BrokenxX
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=) Thanks a lot!

EmilyTheStrange
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I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

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