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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

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Neverland

0 posted 2009-04-02 08:22 PM

Kiss the rain so that,
I might fall in love
with you,
forever.
The rain,
it shows all my tears,
the tears that i've cried,
that i've shed for you,
my love.
Show me why they fall like rain,
and tell me why I can't stop the pain.
My love,
love hurts like the stars
that burn with a smile,
on winter nights so cold.

And when all the light goes dark,
remember this my love;
My tears, they fall like rain,
on a starry night.

Because of you,
Tears will fall as rain,
and now
I know, that I can love you
The rain, it falls on your face,
it falls with such grace,
and the stars are shining bright.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
{~~*~~}

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2009-04-02 09:22 PM

this is beautiful....

freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

2 posted 2009-04-02 11:24 PM

I really like this, it's amazing.

"I can't see my forehead!" -Patrick

Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

3 posted 2009-04-03 03:13 AM

This is very beautiful and has a stark, wintery romance to it.

Love hurts Emily, I know. I've just been hurt deeply by the one I love, so this beautiful poem struck a chord in me.

In these lonely halls no moon will weep, no sun will shine.
In these narrow rooms no tears are seen, no laughter heard!

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2009-04-03 12:49 PM

I was thinking of Love Hurts by Yiruma when I was reading this. This poem is very beautiful and I can connect pretty well.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2009-04-03 02:26 PM

yeah, actually when i wrote it i was listening to that song...so it's kinda like the words to it i guess....it works with the melody.
Thanks for reading.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
{~~*~~}

maddorani
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since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

6 posted 2011-04-21 07:38 PM

i really loved it

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

7 posted 2011-04-28 10:33 PM

=) Thanks a lot!

EmilyTheStrange
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I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

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