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benjamenbutton09
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0 posted 03-27-2009 09:08 PM       View Profile for benjamenbutton09   Email benjamenbutton09   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for benjamenbutton09


The end of our chapter(it's time to move on)
I stand here today
Looking at your face
I see the person that I loved
As I walk away
I wish we could have just been friends
instead of ending it like this today
But it's too late
This relationship has to end
I'll miss you


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freeand2sexy
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1 posted 03-30-2009 01:56 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I can seriously relate to this.

Nice write!

"I can't see my forehead!" -Patrick

lovelyswagg14
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Im serious i went through this situation exactly
I like it
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Kalysta
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3 posted 05-17-2009 09:59 PM       View Profile for Kalysta   Email Kalysta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kalysta

I think this is a good poem, but i think you could make it great by adding a little character to it. Its good but not great like i think you could make it great. Good start. Sorry if i seem harsh. Its just what i think. Keep writing.
~Kalysta~

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