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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 03-26-2009 08:51 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

This is my attempt to free myself from a writers block...I hope you like this, because its all I have in me, lol...so yeah.

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Darkness...
the unending silence among us
while we wait for the sunlight
that lights up the day.

I'm in a maze where I'm trapped,
never being able to grasp the rope
right above me,
so that I can climb out.

Darkness...
a feeling of self-regret
when nothing else matters.
Or does it?

I'm stuck in this hole
and as I scream for someone--anyone,
there's no reply.
How will I go on?

Darkness...
a tug-of-war every day
on the feelings that fight to
overcome my sane self.

I'm surrounded by people
who know nothing about me...
and do little to notice
how hurting I am.

Light...
the beam that brightens my day
in the darkest of tunnels,
while all those past struggles pull on me.

I'm finally free
from everything I've done.
I'm with my old friends,
and the family that loves me.

Here I can breathe the air
and fill up my lungs.
I can jump for joy,
and scream in excitement.

Thank you for helping me,
I owe it all to you...
I love you so much,
but I miss you too...
freedom Pictures, Images and Photos

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

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1 posted 03-26-2009 08:56 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"I'm surrounded by people
who know nothing about me...
and do little to notice
how hurting I am."

I understand this

and what a great picture!
Falling rain
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2 posted 03-26-2009 09:52 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Both the poem and picture are beautiful!! Love this!!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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thanks SEA and zach i'm glad someone responded to this, lol...

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

freeand2sexy
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This is very nice, both the poem and pic!

"I can't see my forehead!" -Patrick

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5 posted 03-28-2009 10:43 PM       View Profile for Suncleaver   Email Suncleaver   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suncleaver

I really enjoyed this Julianna.

In these lonely halls no moon will weep, no sun will shine.
In these narrow rooms no tears are seen, no laughter heard!

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