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Everybody Needs Somebody

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Octave
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since 07-29-2008
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Highlands, Scotland.


0 posted 03-25-2009 01:27 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Octave

This is really, really bad, but it wasn't written to be good. It was just a way of venting so keep that in mind when reading.

Everybody Needs Somebody

Iím so sick and Iím so tired
My smile has finally expired
Been trodden on so many times
Now I have to draw the line

I canít take this, itís all too much
Iím all alone and out of touch
Worthless, useless, you just donít see
Iím in so much pain Iím no longer me

My back is breaking under pain
Rotting, lonely, filled with disdain
No energy left to try and fight
For my life nor for my right

I need someone to hold me down
To not stand by and watch me drown
Just tell me that itíll be okay
That itíll be alright at end of day

Iím so filled with hate, just who am I?
Keep falling down, I donít know why
But itís too late for me to forgive
Iím just too tired, I donít want to live.

[This message has been edited by Octave (03-27-2009 12:33 PM).]

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RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 03-26-2009 08:14 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Mannn this is sooooo good.. i know this feeling oh so well... infact if it wasn't for my daughter i think i would have ended my life by now... she means more to me than anything or anyone in this world... Hold on. cause one day you'll get a perfect lil saviour like i did..

"I'm drowning here in my own cries
To think that i believed your lies
Your tore me down and broke my heart
I wish you'd killed me from the start"
freeand2sexy
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2 posted 03-27-2009 05:51 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

This is good for a vent, and I can relate.

"I can't see my forehead!" -Patrick

 
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