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Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes


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Do I like what I see?
Am I healthy?
Do i look pretty in this Dress?
Do I believe in myself?
Do I love myself?

Yes, I do

Through the looking glass
I see what it truly means to
be a human of God.
I never back down,
I stand up

Lana
XOXOXOX

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1 posted 03-23-2009 08:23 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Wow this poem gave me a little bit of strength to keep hold'n on. I like this.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

Dark Star
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2 posted 03-23-2009 11:26 AM       View Profile for Dark Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Star

T'was the point
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I like the "point" of this poem, it made me think.

Jesus loves you! Don't believe it? Then at least believe that I love you! I may not know you, but you're a person too, and you deserve to be loved.

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4 posted 03-26-2009 07:27 PM       View Profile for Dark Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Star

thnx
 
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