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XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland


0 posted 03-21-2009 01:21 AM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX


There's this aching pain inside,
at the bottom of my heart.
I can't seem to rid of it,
no matter how I start.
Every tear turns to rain,
people learn to lie.
But as I grow weaker,
I'll look towards the sky.
The stars will remind me,
just how much they care.
So if you ever feel lonely,
just look there.


{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
   {~~*~~}

© Copyright 2009 Emmalee Yuri - All Rights Reserved
Suncleaver
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1 posted 03-22-2009 06:52 PM       View Profile for Suncleaver   Email Suncleaver   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suncleaver

I like the contrast of despair and hope here Emily.

It's been a long time since I spoke to you, I hope that you're ok.

Out of reach, out of sight
I feel strange and lost
Can you lead me right?
It's too dark for me to see,
capture of soul won't you please forgive me

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes


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keep on trying
Ethernaut
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3 posted 04-09-2009 02:47 AM       View Profile for Ethernaut   Email Ethernaut   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethernaut's Home Page   View IP for Ethernaut

So true. This reminds me of the  many starlit nights I have spent gazing upwards. In my case it can only be improved by a full moon and perhaps a hint of lightning from a coming storm.
Last night was one such and the storm continued on and off for 4 hours. Dancing in drenching torrential rain is an exquisite joy.
If you ever come to the tropics, try it. It washes away all the pain, frees the soul.
jeffturner
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4 posted 04-13-2009 08:10 AM       View Profile for jeffturner   Email jeffturner   Edit/Delete Message      Click to visit jeffturner's Home Page   View IP for jeffturner

Wow nice poem, good to see this

Kamagra Penegra

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5 posted 04-13-2009 08:37 PM       View Profile for Love_Skull   Email Love_Skull   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Love_Skull

love the poem!
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<3 leah
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