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Hairy Orange

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Octave
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since 07-29-2008
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Highlands, Scotland.


0 posted 03-20-2009 04:55 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Octave

Hairy Orange

I deny that I miss you
Every single day
I assure myself that
I sent you on your way

I feel happy with myself
I stand up tall and proud
I fight the urge to think of you
Memories are not allowed

I tell myself Iím better off
That this was ment to be
I tell myself Iím happy now
That it was never really me

I convince myself I hate you
That you were never right
But as the days wear onwards
I think maybe I caused this fight

Doubt coiled inside my mind
I try to forget your face
But even as I do this
Iím filled with dark disgrace

Our eyes never meet now
Tension steals the air
Heads turned firmly away
Expression hidden under hair

My mocking laughter echoes
Mt taunts run high and dry
Tell myself you want this
Tell myself I neednít try

My days of revelation
Are bitten to the bone
By one simple day that
Reminds me I am on my own

I deny that I miss you
I deny it every day
But if I where to break this
What would you say?

I deny I miss you
It keeps me right on track
But no one really knows that
I kind of want you backÖ

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GothicCherry
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since 09-16-2008
Posts 471
TN


1 posted 03-20-2009 08:58 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Hairy Orange?? Interesting title...
freeand2sexy
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since 09-12-2008
Posts 703
CA, USA


2 posted 03-23-2009 06:15 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I'm very curious as to how you came up with that title.

Hairy orange?

I don't know why, but I like it.

As for your poem, it's good, but you've written better.

Jesus loves you! Don't believe it? Then at least believe that I love you! I may not know you, but you're a person too, and you deserve to be loved.

 
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