Nah, you can save it for an other poem, I wrote this basically because I was bored, and half asleep if you look at the time I posted it which is 3 hours ahead from Cali, so I wasn't even focused on anything that would make it good, except the rhyme.
If I were you I would save it for a poem that matters, but if you're dieing to tell me why, then who am I to stop you.
Jesus loves you! Don't believe it? Then at least believe that I love you! I may not know you, but you're a person too, and you deserve to be loved.