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freeand2sexy
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0 posted 03-20-2009 03:50 AM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Thanks Prettypinkrebel, for helping me with the ending.


Iím not about to cry
So tears stay inside
Just let yourself deny
That you could love that guy

Iím not about scream
So anger hold your tongue
Just let yourself believe
That you were always wrong

Iím not about to forget
So memories please thrive
Hold on to your regrets
As long as youíre alive

Iím not about to lose
So habits you can't win
Finally, I will choose
To live and love, again


Jesus loves you! Don't believe it? Then at least believe that I love you! I may not know you, but you're a person too, and you deserve to be loved.

[This message has been edited by freeand2sexy (03-20-2009 05:58 PM).]

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GothicCherry
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1 posted 03-20-2009 08:48 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

I'm burning your flag..?

No longer shall you nag..?

I'll stuff you in a bag..?

I'm raising my flag..?

You'll be wiped away with a rag..?

Your weight I won't drag..?

Your reign will gag..?

Old habits, start to lag..?



HAHA!!!

Sorry, I had fun with that...hehehehe...
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2 posted 03-20-2009 08:48 AM       View Profile for prettypinkrebel   Email prettypinkrebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for prettypinkrebel

How about Im not about to lose
This haabit cannot win
Finally I will choose to love again
GothicCherry
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3 posted 03-20-2009 08:54 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Ha! Maybe you should go with pretty pink rebel's...

freeand2sexy
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4 posted 03-20-2009 03:23 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I like yours, Prettypinkrebel, I just want to change it a lil bit. Thank you


Thank you Michaela, for your ideas too, I liked reading them, I'm glad you had fun with it.

Jesus loves you! Don't believe it? Then at least believe that I love you! I may not know you, but you're a person too, and you deserve to be loved.

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5 posted 03-20-2009 05:08 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

HaHa!! No prob...heheh...
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6 posted 03-21-2009 01:25 AM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

AH! I love this!
What a brilliant write!
Library for sure.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
   {~~*~~}

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7 posted 03-21-2009 05:37 AM       View Profile for moonbeam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonbeam

In contrast Christine, this is awful imo - and I'll tell you why if you want.  But you ought to know.
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8 posted 03-21-2009 12:40 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Nah, you can save it for an other poem, I wrote this basically because I was bored, and half asleep if you look at the time I posted it which is 3 hours ahead from Cali, so I wasn't even focused on anything that would make it good, except the rhyme.

If I were you I would save it for a poem that matters, but if you're dieing to tell me why, then who am I to stop you.

Jesus loves you! Don't believe it? Then at least believe that I love you! I may not know you, but you're a person too, and you deserve to be loved.

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9 posted 03-21-2009 04:35 PM       View Profile for moonbeam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonbeam

Lol it's ok Christine I'm not dying to tell you, mainly because it'll mean reading it again .  I'll save it for when you do it again then ...

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10 posted 03-22-2009 08:37 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

lol

If I do it again, you mean.

Wait what am I thinking, of course I'm going to do it again.

Now I'm kinda scared. Eh, oh well.

Jesus loves you! Don't believe it? Then at least believe that I love you! I may not know you, but you're a person too, and you deserve to be loved.

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11 posted 03-23-2009 08:45 AM       View Profile for prettypinkrebel   Email prettypinkrebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for prettypinkrebel

your welcome
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12 posted 03-24-2009 12:21 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Ahhh!! I simply love this to like no end! Its just simply amazing. I love it! And you say that Michaela and I are good at writing. Look at who taught us! (Library)

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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