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freeand2sexy
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So live and stop the whining now
So fly and start your dreaming soon
So cry but wipe your tears away
And love beneath another moon
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Hmmmm, I don't exactly believe in dreaming except during sleep. It's pointless to me.
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Maybe you could come up with a better word than 'cry' It annoys me. Maybe weep or something of the sort.
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