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illuminated truth
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0 posted 03-18-2009 10:19 PM       View Profile for illuminated truth   Email illuminated truth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit illuminated truth's Home Page   View IP for illuminated truth

The world is filled with so much hate
Hate used for hidden fears
Fears of being different,
Fears that are used to mask the insecure
Insecurity starts from within
Within the heart, & inside the mind
But the real beauty of a person is inside..
Inside the soul.
Seek yourself & you shell find
Find beauty in imperfection
Real beauty beyond a mirror reflection
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GothicCherry
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1 posted 03-20-2009 08:32 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

I'm sorry, but I REALLY liked this and I just had to clean it up a little bit so that I could read it easily.

The idea is very good I thought.

The world consists of much hate.
That hate is used for hidden fears
The fears of being different,
fears used to mask the insecure.
Insecurity starts from within,
within the heart, and inside the mind.
Yet the real beauty of a person is inside,
inside the soul.
Seek yourself and you shall find,
find beauty in imperfection
Real beauty beyond that of reflection.

freeand2sexy
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since 09-12-2008
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2 posted 03-22-2009 08:30 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I really like the message!!

And don't mind Michaela, she's been doing that a lot.

I have to be honest, I like the way you wrote it, and not so much how she changed it a bit.

Jesus loves you! Don't believe it? Then at least believe that I love you! I may not know you, but you're a person too, and you deserve to be loved.

GothicCherry
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3 posted 03-22-2009 09:18 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Yea don't mind me at all. I just get sooo bored and start changing things to how would have done them.
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