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Octave
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since 2008-07-29
Posts 186
Highlands, Scotland.

0 posted 2009-03-18 12:59 PM


Cherophobia

Today was a long day
Standing on my feet
Heart strung out to dry
Past caring to compete

Skin was looking pale
As I sunk down with a sigh
Mouth couldn’t smile
But I didn’t even try

Standing in a fog of
My own loneliness
I bidn’t try to help myself
Out from this ugly mess

Pushing people too far
Beyond what was right
Only got myself to blame
As I spurred on every fight

Put on a pair of sunglasses
To hid my silent need
For somebody to pick me up
And listen to me bleed

My sorrow and unhappiness
My bad thoughts and my grief
The doubt that sits upon my mind
Bled out with great relief

But I don’t have a somebody
To take me in their hand
To put sunshine into my heart
And just try to be my friend.

[This message has been edited by Octave (03-19-2009 01:03 PM).]

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GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
TN
1 posted 2009-03-18 04:05 PM


I'll be your frinn!!!

I loved this...A lot.

Falling rain
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2 posted 2009-03-18 04:42 PM


Don't worry. Here, your among friends. Just give one of us a call and we'll coming running to your aid.

Hang in there,
-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

Falling rain
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3 posted 2009-03-18 04:43 PM


Sorry I forgot to add this to my library.

Still a great poem!!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
4 posted 2009-03-18 05:03 PM


This is really good, and Zach is right we're all friends here.

You can be my newest friend, if you want of course.

Email me, we can chat!!!

No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

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