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Octave
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0 posted 03-18-2009 12:59 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Octave

Cherophobia

Today was a long day
Standing on my feet
Heart strung out to dry
Past caring to compete

Skin was looking pale
As I sunk down with a sigh
Mouth couldnít smile
But I didnít even try

Standing in a fog of
My own loneliness
I bidnít try to help myself
Out from this ugly mess

Pushing people too far
Beyond what was right
Only got myself to blame
As I spurred on every fight

Put on a pair of sunglasses
To hid my silent need
For somebody to pick me up
And listen to me bleed

My sorrow and unhappiness
My bad thoughts and my grief
The doubt that sits upon my mind
Bled out with great relief

But I donít have a somebody
To take me in their hand
To put sunshine into my heart
And just try to be my friend.

[This message has been edited by Octave (03-19-2009 01:03 PM).]

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GothicCherry
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1 posted 03-18-2009 04:05 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

I'll be your frinn!!!

I loved this...A lot.
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2 posted 03-18-2009 04:42 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Don't worry. Here, your among friends. Just give one of us a call and we'll coming running to your aid.

Hang in there,
-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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3 posted 03-18-2009 04:43 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Sorry I forgot to add this to my library.

Still a great poem!!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

freeand2sexy
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4 posted 03-18-2009 05:03 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

This is really good, and Zach is right we're all friends here.

You can be my newest friend, if you want of course.

Email me, we can chat!!!

No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

 
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