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This Girl

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Clockwork_Orange
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do you see that girl over there
with the stunning eyes and the gorgeous hair
she holds the world in her hands with the slightest of ease
like the worlds too small and she can barely breath
so desprately i say her name out loud
hoping she will turn around

she'll never know this feeling of the way she makes me feel
like concrete, i must believe this is real

her smiles bright with the fading light
shes always clever and shes such a sight
shes got a voice to ignite the sky
im falling fast, im not going to lie

this amazing girl is my only care
and you can count that ill be there

she'll never know this feeling of the way she makes me feel
like concrete, i must believe this is real

~ you cant run from yourself ~

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RevengeIsMine
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LOVE IT!.. so cute!!
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Haha! Yes Jess, this is very adorable. lol

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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