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GothicCherry
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0 posted 03-16-2009 10:30 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for GothicCherry


Second plea in games of lust
drowns the first of pleas for trust.
Far from fair instants, delights.
Stupid girl: afraid of night.
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1 posted 03-17-2009 07:51 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

"Second plea in game the of lust
drowns the first of pleas for trust.
Far from fair instant delights.
Stupid girl: afraid of what's right."

I liked this but I had to re-write it in the way I would of said it. But its still good the way you said it.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

GothicCherry
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2 posted 03-17-2009 08:20 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

The way I said it had to deal with how my ex made me do a lot of stuff with him when I didn't want to. Long story. Just a vent.
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3 posted 03-17-2009 04:31 PM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange

wow. thats about all i can say.
Octave
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4 posted 03-18-2009 01:04 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Octave

I agree with Clockwork. This is amazing. Short but...sweet?
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5 posted 03-22-2009 01:02 PM       View Profile for pen&paper   Email pen&paper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen&paper

Again, with the awesomeness.
So amazing, as usual.

Cierra
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6 posted 03-22-2009 01:44 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Thanks
Dark Star
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says a lot in such little amounts, nice
 
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