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GothicCherry
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0 posted 03-16-2009 09:42 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for GothicCherry


The crimson pellets fall
for sheer thoughtless mistakes.
Shouting ďHelp!Ē a soundless call.
No one hears as skin cells break.

Itís a cursed addiction I must stop,
yet I barely make it day to dayÖ
Passing through life to eavesdrop,
on my own whispers, as I decay.
© Copyright 2009 Michaela J. McHone - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-16-2009 09:56 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

"Passing through life to eavesdrop,
on my own whispers, as I decay"

I'm sorry hon, I hope your doing better.. But that line above is like my favorite line of the day. lol

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

GothicCherry
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2 posted 03-16-2009 09:59 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Yeaaa, I'm not.

&& the 'I decay' part was sort of meant also as like in IM as 'IDK' because i feel like I know nothing.

Thanks.
Octave
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3 posted 03-18-2009 01:01 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Octave

Very, very pretty. Hope you're feeling better. Hang in there.
pen&paper
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4 posted 03-22-2009 01:00 PM       View Profile for pen&paper   Email pen&paper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen&paper

I absolutely love this. It's so perfectly written. Excellent job.

Cierra
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5 posted 03-22-2009 07:52 PM       View Profile for Dark Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Star

i hope everything is okay, enjoyed
 
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