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Octave
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since 07-29-2008
Posts 188
Highlands, Scotland.


0 posted 03-16-2009 03:43 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Octave

Uncharted

Leave me in my own world
Where I can live alone
Iím not anti-social I just
Like being on my own

Everything in fragments
Shattered all around
I live inside my head
Making my own sound

People say Iím lonely
That I am inside out
Some whisper pity while
Others simply shout

Sitting in a cardboard box
Lined with all my fears
Iím not really simple
You can see that in my tears

I like this pretty silence
It treats me as a friend
I treat this as one moment
And I accept the end

I donít need human comfort
I disagree with satisfaction
I disobey my solitude
Which drives me to distraction

Thereís no such thing as happiness
Itís a thought we like to keep
A thought that tends to haunt me
As I swallow down my sleep

People like to say the end
Is just the death of the beginning
Thereís no such thing as conclusion
And itís what keeps the world spinning

So leave me in my own world
Itís really up to me
Stuck inside this empty shell
I just want to be.

Meh. I have writers block at the moment.
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freeand2sexy
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since 09-12-2008
Posts 703
CA, USA


1 posted 03-18-2009 05:07 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I think this is amazing for having writer's block.

No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

GothicCherry
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since 09-16-2008
Posts 471
TN


2 posted 03-20-2009 08:55 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

"People say Iím lonely
That I am inside out
Some whisper pity while
Others simply shout"


I like it!!
 
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