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Octave Member
since 2008-07-29
Posts 186Highlands, Scotland. |
Uncharted Leave me in my own world Where I can live alone I’m not anti-social I just Like being on my own Everything in fragments Shattered all around I live inside my head Making my own sound People say I’m lonely That I am inside out Some whisper pity while Others simply shout Sitting in a cardboard box Lined with all my fears I’m not really simple You can see that in my tears I like this pretty silence It treats me as a friend I treat this as one moment And I accept the end I don’t need human comfort I disagree with satisfaction I disobey my solitude Which drives me to distraction There’s no such thing as happiness It’s a thought we like to keep A thought that tends to haunt me As I swallow down my sleep People like to say the end Is just the death of the beginning There’s no such thing as conclusion And it’s what keeps the world spinning So leave me in my own world It’s really up to me Stuck inside this empty shell I just want to be. Meh. I have writers block at the moment. |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
I think this is amazing for having writer's block. No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else! |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
"People say I’m lonely That I am inside out Some whisper pity while Others simply shout" I like it!! |
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