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JennJenn
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0 posted 03-16-2009 10:38 AM       View Profile for JennJenn   Email JennJenn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennJenn

I miss your smile,
Your beautiful face
I miss the feeling
Of your warm embrace

I miss your voice
And your whole-hearted smile
I loved your laughter
We hadnít heard in a while

I love the way you fought
And I looked up to you
But you can rest with God now
For your fight is finally through

And I will always love you
Iíll never forget that day
But one thing Iíll always remember:
Iíll be seeing you someday.
© Copyright 2009 Jenn - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-16-2009 10:49 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Hey Jenn,

This reminds me of my special friend, Cade.  I miss him every day.  I miss his smile and his laughter and our conversations.  I miss how he loved me and was my friend.

I like this poem.  Thank you for bringing a special person to my thoughts this morning.

A
JennJenn
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2 posted 03-16-2009 02:03 PM       View Profile for JennJenn   Email JennJenn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennJenn

Thanks Alison

It's about my baba, she died a few months ago. We lived together so yeah...
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3 posted 03-17-2009 10:26 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I loved the 1st stanza! (and the rest of it, too.)

No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

 
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