I think this is incredible; I love how you wrote with amazing descriptions.
"My swirling hair, all fancy curls
in rivulets of brown and black."
I wanted to reply with a "balance" of positive and negative like we chatted about earlier, but I can't see anything negative about this, but if I spot something later, I'll let you know.
Oh, and I'm not good with titles but you could simply title it "Dear Sir Leo", Idk, I can't think of anything else.
No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!