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stacylynn418
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0 posted 03-14-2009 02:20 PM       View Profile for stacylynn418   Email stacylynn418   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stacylynn418

She clings to every word he ever said
And any thoughts he shares,
Hoping she might find a clue
That, in secrecy, he cares.

She refuses to accept as truth
That a love so fierce could die.
If he loved her then, won’t the love her now?
She will never say goodbye.

He speaks of days they used to share,
As if they’re distant past.
She holds these reminiscences close,
Hoping they won’t really be the last.

She does not have a plan,
Nor does she know how this could work,
But she’s clutching to it desperately,
Just waiting to get hurt.  
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fromme2U
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1 posted 03-14-2009 02:47 PM       View Profile for fromme2U   Email fromme2U   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fromme2U

This was nice!
isabella223
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2 posted 03-14-2009 05:47 PM       View Profile for isabella223   Email isabella223   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for isabella223

i really like the last stanza.
freeand2sexy
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3 posted 03-14-2009 08:28 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I like the last stanza too!

I really enjoyed reading this!

No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

GothicCherry
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4 posted 03-15-2009 05:49 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

I liked this..

Hmmm, I think the first line would sound better if worded a tad bit differently. Just my opinion.
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