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What's moving me to move (freewrite #1)

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freeand2sexy
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0 posted 03-13-2009 06:13 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy


This just a freewrite I made myself write it in 3-5 minutes. Freewrites are fun especially if you have writer's block. My subject was What moves you?

What's moving me to move
And do what I please
To choose what I choose
Then let it fall with ease
What moves me now
What moved me then
What makes me hide
And then pretend
What makes me cry
The tears of others
Or the hidden lies
Of their own mothers
What's moving me to move
And do what I must
To choose what I choose
And live in this lust


Um, being a freewrite I was just having fun with this, and wasn't trying to use meter or anything else so no critiques on my freewrites, yeah there're horrible but horribly fun, as well




No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!
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isabella223
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1 posted 03-14-2009 08:19 PM       View Profile for isabella223   Email isabella223   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for isabella223

haha, what does mean? just out of curiosty
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2 posted 03-14-2009 08:24 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

What does this freewrite mean?

Idk, whatever you want it to mean.

No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

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3 posted 03-14-2009 08:31 PM       View Profile for isabella223   Email isabella223   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for isabella223

o no.. i mean the 2sexy? the free wrte was great
freeand2sexy
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4 posted 03-14-2009 08:35 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

oh, haha, I'm a lil stupid today sry, it's the weekend you know. well if you really want to know, email me and I'll tell you, I rather not say here.

No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

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5 posted 03-15-2009 05:52 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Christine, tell me on myspace what 2sexy means lol

&& I think I like your "fun" lol
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