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Somewhere In Nowhere

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Octave
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since 07-29-2008
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0 posted 03-13-2009 06:03 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Octave

Somewhere In Nowhere

Iím somewhere in-between
Point A and point B
Beginning and infinity
Ecstasy and insanity

Standing on wrong and right
I donít bark I just bite
Winking slyly before my sight
If for love but also spite

Spin me through your tears
Iím eating up the years
Farewell to my fears
My motive quite unclear

Donít let me have my say
I fear I may have to pay
For the words I do obey
That keep me from my way

Iím sitting in the absence
Of a misunderstood sense
Dancing with a sixpence
Of a verbal incontinence

Iím somewhere in between
Point A and point B
Just waiting for you to see
That this isnít really me.


Different from my usual rhyme scheme. I was experimenting. sorry about mudddledness, wonky rymthm and the like.
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freeand2sexy
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since 09-12-2008
Posts 703
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1 posted 03-13-2009 07:51 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I think it was alright, but definitely not your best.

No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

GothicCherry
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since 09-16-2008
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2 posted 03-15-2009 05:40 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Well, I loved it!! I enjoyed it like a whole lot lol
sweet_darling
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3 posted 06-11-2009 10:53 PM       View Profile for sweet_darling   Email sweet_darling   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for sweet_darling

i love this poem! i can definatly relate!
nehematala
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4 posted 06-12-2009 12:56 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

I love this poem

If your parents never had children, chances are you won't, either.

 
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