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Sixpence

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Octave
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since 07-29-2008
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Highlands, Scotland.


0 posted 03-13-2009 02:44 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Octave

Sixpence

I like crying in the rain
Just so no one knows
Emotions on a sixpence
Swallowing the blows

I just want to get lost
Inside this far forever
Lose every single memory
Of us and our together

My face inside my fingers
Rocking on my heels
I want to taste your happiness
Just want to see how it feels

Lying in the petty grass
Face down to the sky
Eating up the atmosphere
I donít even want to try

Climb out your body
And come dance with me
Technicolour happiness
Is everything I see

Magic smile churning
Take your hand in mine
Glue a smile on your heart
And just pretend youíre fine

I like crying in the rain
As Iím sitting on this shelf
Waiting for my time to come
It hides me from myself.


Not very good, sorry.
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freeand2sexy
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since 09-12-2008
Posts 703
CA, USA


1 posted 03-13-2009 07:47 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I think this was very good. I did have to look up the word Sixpence, but learning a new word doesn't hurt anyone(though I doubt I'll ever use it.)

Awesome write!

No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

stacylynn418
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since 03-06-2009
Posts 40
new york


2 posted 03-14-2009 02:23 PM       View Profile for stacylynn418   Email stacylynn418   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stacylynn418

i think this is really good.
A lot of really good imagery, and very well written.
good job :]
GothicCherry
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since 09-16-2008
Posts 471
TN


3 posted 03-15-2009 05:45 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Is sixpence your new word? lol

It was in the last poem I read of yours too.

Nice write.
Octave
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Highlands, Scotland.


4 posted 03-16-2009 12:50 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Octave

Haha, yeah it has been popping up quite a lot lately. Thanks everyone who commented.
 
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