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pen&paper
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0 posted 03-13-2009 09:38 AM       View Profile for pen&paper   Email pen&paper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for pen&paper

It's five thirty in the morning
       Again
Time to get up for school
       Again
I go to my dresser and pick out a black shirt
       Again.

I love this color
It's my sheild
My safe place
No one looks, but to wonder
"Why does she always wear black?"

I don't mind so much.
They can say or think whatever they want.
As can I.
There are those who love me in black
Or blue or green or any other color
I have yet to find one that surpasses ebony, however

Those people wouldn't listen
Even if I could tell them
That I'm not really so horrible
Or depressed
I'm happiest
When i'm in black.
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1 posted 03-13-2009 01:00 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Ah I know that feeling. Nice write.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

freeand2sexy
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2 posted 03-13-2009 07:39 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Uh, couldn't say I know that feeling, I'm more of a bright colors type of person, you know pink, light blue, yellow etc. but black is awesome too.

No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

[This message has been edited by freeand2sexy (03-14-2009 02:57 AM).]

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3 posted 03-15-2009 05:32 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Ha! I definately know that feeling. Everyone thinks black is a depressed color. Pink is my depressed color. Black is a happy color. I liked the way you wrote this
 
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