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illuminated truth
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0 posted 03-13-2009 12:17 AM       View Profile for illuminated truth   Email illuminated truth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit illuminated truth's Home Page   View IP for illuminated truth

All that time we spent together.
Now I'm left to think whether...
what we had was ever real.
I wish we could change places so you can see how I feel.
To be good to you, I tried so hard...
Now I regret letting down my guard.
I just want you to answer, who was there for you in the tough times
Any problem that you went through, the problem became mines
When you needed help with anything, I was there.
But in the end you cut me deep, let me bleed, & didn't even care.
I shared my deepest secrets with you that no one else knew
Nothing can replace the things that we went through
About you I thought I knew everything there was to know
But I had no idea that you was putting on a show
I did have a funny feeling things you told me were odd
But I had no idea everything about you was a facade
I will never understand why you hid the things that you hid
Or the activities behind my back or what you did
How you really felt, numerous times I would ask
Not once would you reveal yourself, take off your mask
That was until the boiling point reached an end
And I had to finally accept it was a stranger I called friend
It was the only time that your true self was finally shown
And the person I thought I knew for 8 yrs was really an unknown
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freeand2sexy
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1 posted 03-13-2009 07:28 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

The first time I read this, I thought it was good, but then I read this a second time and it really tugged on my heart because I felt like this is something an old friend of mines would say to me.

Nice Write!

No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

illuminated truth
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2 posted 03-14-2009 12:03 AM       View Profile for illuminated truth   Email illuminated truth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit illuminated truth's Home Page   View IP for illuminated truth

Thanks.

GothicCherry
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3 posted 03-15-2009 05:27 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for posting it
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