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I Love You

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angel1326
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Baby I love you from the bottom of my heart.
You know the right words to say to me.
You know how to hold me and kiss me.
You know I love your smiles.
You know I'm scared to lose you and I miss you when your gone.
I love all of the kisses I get and the hugs too.
Baby no one could ever love you the way I do.

Sick of crying, tired of trying, yeah im smiling but inside im dying...
I am the girl who is too sad to give a fuck...

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kiwie15:D
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personally i really like this poem...i understand it..and i like how you put feeling into it...<3i really like the last part...no one loves you like i do...must be a very special person....want to here more

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                             kiwie
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Awwe. Nice write.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

 
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