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angel1326
New Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 4
WV, United States

0 posted 2009-03-11 08:47 PM



Mirror, mirror on the wall,
What I see is not what it is at all,
Why do I think this way and why do I see what I see,
I try to love myself for no one but me,
Help me please I need to see the real me,
People say I'm not fat but I think I'm not thin either,
Do I look fat in these jeans,
Do I look good in this shirt,
Please help me and tell me what it is you see,
I need everyone to love me for me,
I need to love me for me,
What do I do,
So I ask the mirror, mirror on the wall,
Because what you see I don't see it at all.

Sick of crying, tired of trying, yeah im smiling but inside im dying...
I am the girl who is too sad to give a fuck...

© Copyright 2009 Danielle Smith - All Rights Reserved
kiwie15:D
Junior Member
since 2009-03-05
Posts 13
california
1 posted 2009-03-11 11:02 PM


well angel136 lol...i like your poems this one is my facorite so far. People should love you for who you are and not so much what they see in cluding you. i am not so skinny myself but i have learned to love my self for me.

                      always
                         kiwie

freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
2 posted 2009-03-12 01:31 PM


I really like this!!!

WELCOME TO PIP!!!

No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

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