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kiwie15:D Junior Member
since 2009-03-05
Posts 13california |
i feel so angry all the time sometimes i just want to rhyme there's a lot going on i just want the time to freeze it's impossible not to think badly i just want everything to stop please i want it to end the pain that i am feeling is driving me insane it's just not fare i really do want it to end so all i have to do is mend |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
The first stanza sounds like something from a Linkin' Park song. LOL! |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
I don't care for the first stanza, really, but it was understandable so thats good. With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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KandyGrl511 Member
since 2008-11-30
Posts 52Michigan |
i like this one.... <3 <3 i love u<3 |
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kiwie15:D Junior Member
since 2009-03-05
Posts 13california |
thank you >< and i never realized that lol...i hope its a good thing  |
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