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kiwie15:D
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0 posted 03-10-2009 11:00 PM       View Profile for kiwie15:D   Email kiwie15:D   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kiwie15:D


i feel so angry
all the time
sometimes i just
want to rhyme

there's a lot going on
i just want the time to freeze
it's impossible not to think badly
i just want everything to stop please

i want it to end
the pain
that i am feeling
is driving me insane

it's just not fare
i really do want it to end
so all i have to
do is mend

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GothicCherry
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1 posted 03-11-2009 11:49 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

The first stanza sounds like something from a Linkin' Park song. LOL!
freeand2sexy
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2 posted 03-11-2009 12:12 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I don't care for the first stanza, really, but it was understandable so thats good.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

KandyGrl511
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3 posted 03-11-2009 09:41 PM       View Profile for KandyGrl511   Email KandyGrl511   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for KandyGrl511

i like this one.... <3

<3 i love u<3

kiwie15:D
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4 posted 03-11-2009 10:52 PM       View Profile for kiwie15:D   Email kiwie15:D   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kiwie15:D

thank you >< and i never realized that lol...i hope its a good thing
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