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kiwie15:D
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since 2009-03-05
Posts 13
california

0 posted 2009-03-10 10:47 PM



let's say your drinking
you think your pretty cool
let's say you "had" friends
because now they think your a fool

let's say you are in a gang
your feeling pretty tuff
let's say you think its no problem
but when it comes to school you think its rough

let's say you like to make fun of people
you say your just playing
let's say they don't believe you
it hurts what your saying

let's say you want to fight
because they call you "lame"
let's say you do
but you don't get any of your fame

let's say people don't care
but then i would be lying
let's say you don't care
but inside your crying


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GothicCherry
Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
TN
1 posted 2009-03-11 09:48 AM


I enjoyed this one a lot.
freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
2 posted 2009-03-11 12:10 PM


I'm a lil iffy on some of the lines, but it was a nice read.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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