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shattered-smiles
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since 01-20-2008
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inside the shadows


0 posted 03-10-2009 09:34 PM       View Profile for shattered-smiles   Email shattered-smiles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for shattered-smiles

O Daddy,
I hate you
from the bottom of my soul.

O Daddy,
I loathe you,
no need to control.

(Daddy, Daddy,
where did you go?
Deep in the ground
where you heart's
been lying alone?)

O Daddy,
I remember when you were drunk,
when you wanted nothing but my life.

O Daddy,
shut the h*** up,
I'm sick of hearing these f****** lies.

(Daddy, Daddy,
what happened to you?
Did you finally forget yourself
when you married
your so-called wife?)

O Daddy,
I'm through with you,
don't treat me like your slave.

O Daddy,
I'm finally walking away,
it's your love I no longer crave.

my knuckles have turned to white, there's no turning back tonight ----- kiss me one last time [shut your eyes]

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RevengeIsMine
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since 07-08-2006
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1 posted 03-10-2009 09:44 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Tori.... This is amazing.. and so true.. You don't need a dad who treats you wrong..

Excelent write sweetie..

xx
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2 posted 03-10-2009 09:49 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Tori, This is perfect as always.
I love it.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

angel1326
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since 03-11-2009
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WV, United States


3 posted 03-11-2009 08:54 PM       View Profile for angel1326   Email angel1326   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel1326

This is a great poem... hope to see more like this....<3

Sick of crying, tired of trying, yeah im smiling but inside im dying...
I am the girl who is too sad to give a fuck...

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