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Falling rain
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Okay this poem is an attempt to break my writers block. It's alright I think..

Whispering
Calling your name
I hear the voice
One and the same

It whispers doubt
Despair and dark fears
Its reasons understanding
Thoughts crystal clear

Its tongue a razor blade
Pressing on my skin
A battle left for the dead
Something I just can't win

A grip ghostly but tight
A hold on every mistake
Faintly reminding me
with every breath I take

Whispering
Voices of doubt
Filling my ears
With painful shouts

[This message has been edited by Falling rain (03-10-2009 09:51 PM).]

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OMG!!!! zach this was...just wow. i'm speachless. i think you get the hint, lol .
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?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

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This is good Zach. Writer's block is so horrible, I hope you break yours for good.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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I'm pretty sure your writer's block is over with Zach.
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it is really good, but?  you ok?

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Thanks for your comments guys.

Sea I'm having my struggles like anyone else. But its nothing too serious.

Thanks for caring

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

 
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