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Feelings Unrequited

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As ready as I am for you, as much As i really care,
your feelings change for me everyday I realize you will never really be there
You spoke the words I love you and told me this felt right
Then said goodbye in the mdst of the twilight.
I still dont understand the way your mind changes and I probably never will.
This pain it hurts and yes it's real the way I feel
it wont change I love you
your just not ready to love me too
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Enjoyed...
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There are places where you are missing some punctuation, but I really liked reading this.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

 
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