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pandabear
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0 posted 03-09-2009 11:39 PM       View Profile for pandabear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandabear


What do I want?
........................
I want to run
I want to hide
I want to go away from you
Yes, you the one who makes me wish I was gone, run and even hide
You tell me things that are not true
Like
Your a failure in life
You need to live your life the way I want you too
Not the way you want to
Only because your a teenager
You don't know what you want
You don't know who you really are
I do
I know what you need
I know who you really are
But, you have to do as I say
Even if it makes you cry
Or even make you feel like you want to runaway
I know you wont 'cuz your too scared
To scared to cry
Even to scared to even runaway

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GothicCherry
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1 posted 03-10-2009 10:10 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

I liked the way this began in one persons point of view and then switched to another, but it can also be quite confusing.

Enjoyed...
 
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