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does he love me like he says he does?

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pandabear
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0 posted 03-09-2009 09:45 PM       View Profile for pandabear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandabear

My dad tells me he loves me
But, then he walks away and wispers I hates you
What does this mean?
Why do you hate me so much?
Is it because I live my life my way not yours?
Do you or don't you?
Love me?
Or...
Sad to say even hate me???
I want to know do you or don't you?
Why is it so hard to say I love you?
It makes me cry to not know if you love me
Or
Even hate me
And why is it that you compair me to others?
Is it because their smarter or even better then me?
These are just questions that can't be answerd
I can live without knowing the answear
But, can you?
When you figure it out let me know

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pandabear
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1 posted 03-09-2009 09:46 PM       View Profile for pandabear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandabear

this is so not true because my dad loves me
GothicCherry
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2 posted 03-10-2009 10:00 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Well, whether it's true for you or not, it is, sadly enough, very true for others. I liked this. I am wondering where your ideea for this came from if it is not about you.
pandabear
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3 posted 03-10-2009 12:22 PM       View Profile for pandabear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandabear

i can only write sad poems cuz its hard for me to write happy poems cuz all i think about many is things that are depressing so yea
GothicCherry
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4 posted 03-20-2009 08:38 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Completely understandable. I think most people now-a-days do that.
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5 posted 03-20-2009 01:10 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I can only write sad poems too. Its not that I'm some disturbing child its just I can understand sorrow way better then happiness. But then again, what is there to understand? Anywho.. I really like this! While reading this I kept thinking about picking off flower peddles saying "She does, She doesn't, She does, etc."

-Zach  

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

 
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