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gdcod2player
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0 posted 03-09-2009 08:06 PM       View Profile for gdcod2player   Email gdcod2player   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for gdcod2player


Been broken with out sound
The girl I lost that night
She has a heart I canít find
Where is she hiding from me?
How many nightsí must I lay awake?
I donít want to waste my life
When can I stop looking for this beautiful girl?
I wonít find her again
The heart I want wonít be found
Is she testing to see if I understood?
The directions she gave me
Are they a map to show me where sheís at?
Or are they leading me back to where she stood
I feel like I canít find her
I wonder if sheís figured it out
I wonít ever stop
Where is she?
Allyson I canít hold back any longer
No matter how far away you are
I wonít ever give up or rest
The path Iíve built is going to keep on going
Till I run into your road
The road that has everything i want
the road that has a place to rest
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GothicCherry
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1 posted 03-09-2009 08:45 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

I think this is pretty is a broken way. I like how it doesn't have much end rhyme. I'm not that big of a rhyming fan.
freeand2sexy
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2 posted 03-10-2009 03:29 AM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Well I'm the opposite of Michaela here, I love end rhyme, and don't like free verse so much, but I thought this was nice. I totally understood what you were saying in this poem.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

GothicCherry
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3 posted 03-10-2009 10:16 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Christine, it is truly amazing how we can be opposites yet still be so much alike.
freeand2sexy
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4 posted 03-10-2009 01:50 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

It's a shocker, ain't It?

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

GothicCherry
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5 posted 03-10-2009 02:04 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Yupps sure is..but let's quit taking over this thread lol
 
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