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Darkness

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daddysgurlxx5xx
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In the darkness
their my love lies
the streets that once glittered with gold,
now are just dusty, forgotton, ad cold

You disappeared from the light
came and went with out a fight
you were my angel
and everything i've ever needed

into the darkness
the shadows once stood
my love for you once was true
but it faded away, into the blue

Darkness i am.
Light i was,
my love for was strong
faded away into darkness
found out it was nothing but lies
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pandabear
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that was really good
GothicCherry
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You have talent I'll say that much. I enjoyed the way you dfescribed certain things.
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I really like this and welcome to Pip.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.
 
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