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Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada

0 posted 2009-03-07 05:28 PM


Jane saw Spot

I was dancing in
The rain one day
A simple pleasure
By the way

And Jane saw Spot
As he started to run
And being a kind hearted child
I had some childish fun

I was dancing in the
Sun last night
Which may give
Some a fright

But Jane saw Spot
As he started to run
And being a kind hearted child
I had some childish fun

What an ugly shirt
Which has a large distain
If you don’t see me smile
It’s because I’m not in pain

For Jane saw Spot
As he started to run
And being a kind hearted child
I had some childish fun


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prettypinkrebel
Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 104

1 posted 2009-03-10 03:04 PM


great poem. like the description
GothicCherry
Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
TN
2 posted 2009-03-20 08:35 AM


Uh, what does this mean? I got very confused....Lol....Is that the point?
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