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Jane saw Spot (funny)

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Earl Robertson
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0 posted 03-07-2009 05:28 PM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Earl Robertson

Jane saw Spot

I was dancing in
The rain one day
A simple pleasure
By the way

And Jane saw Spot
As he started to run
And being a kind hearted child
I had some childish fun

I was dancing in the
Sun last night
Which may give
Some a fright

But Jane saw Spot
As he started to run
And being a kind hearted child
I had some childish fun

What an ugly shirt
Which has a large distain
If you donít see me smile
Itís because Iím not in pain

For Jane saw Spot
As he started to run
And being a kind hearted child
I had some childish fun

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1 posted 03-10-2009 03:04 PM       View Profile for prettypinkrebel   Email prettypinkrebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for prettypinkrebel

great poem. like the description
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2 posted 03-20-2009 08:35 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Uh, what does this mean? I got very confused....Lol....Is that the point?
 
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