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Belinda
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0 posted 03-06-2009 11:02 PM       View Profile for Belinda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Belinda


it pours from me,
not red but blue,
not what is expected?
don't aim to please you

you don't understand me,
so please don't pretend,
i would rather die again,
than see our end

i want you
a passionate yearn,
i hate you
soon i'll learn

mixed up
just lost
you're right,
at any cost

drunk and honest
sober thoughts
mind still rational,
crossees or noughts?

love me
please
don't tease.

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

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GothicCherry
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1 posted 03-07-2009 10:08 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Interesting but over all I like it
Belinda
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2 posted 03-09-2009 01:43 PM       View Profile for Belinda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Belinda

a little abstract haha
i'm not sure exactly what it means, but it made sense there and then

thanks
Belinda~*

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3 posted 03-20-2009 08:40 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Lol...Most of my poems don't make sense after going back to read them so I see where you are coming from
 
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