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Britt_Brat
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Knoxville, TN


0 posted 03-06-2009 10:47 AM       View Profile for Britt_Brat   Email Britt_Brat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Britt_Brat

Walking down a darkened road waiting...
Waiting till that moment when I can stop fighting...
Fighting just to be a normal person in her eyes...
In her eye I can't make a mistake...
I'm not perfect and never will be...
Perfection is not an option...
Options for me are limited...
limited freedoms with her...
With her i have to beg...
begging is for dogs...
But I'm not a dog I'm a person...
A person who has to fight...
Fighting a mother...
A mother stuck in the past..
Her past...
And she blames me for all that went wrong in her life...

cut and bleeding

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1 posted 03-06-2009 12:16 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Very sad...but it sounds as if you do
wish to connect to your mother.

Perhaps your minister, or a friend you
may have in common, could help?



I'll keep you in my prayers.

GothicCherry
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2 posted 03-06-2009 06:18 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

It sounds like me and my mother. It sucks I know. I like the way you started each line with the last words in the preceding line.
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