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kiwie15:D
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0 posted 03-05-2009 01:57 PM       View Profile for kiwie15:D   Email kiwie15:D   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kiwie15:D

confusing emotions running
through my head
so many to choose from
easier done then said

i want you
but then i dont
what i feel for you is hard to cope
a lot or a little or is there no hope

you say you don't like me
but you give me clues that you do
i am sorry you that you dont have the
guts to say I LIKE YOU!!!

things are starting to clear up
i kno me decision
and this is the end
you and me is my vision

now here is the hard part
let me tell you
what i have to say
cause if i dont i will have to pay

i like you and i like you a lot
i hope you like me too
because this is the truth
the next step is all you.

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland


1 posted 03-05-2009 02:04 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Awe.
good first post.

Welcome to pip,

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with you


2 posted 03-05-2009 02:31 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

love that,
"the next step is all you"

that takes guts and is very brave of you to put your feelings out there like that. Good for you!! Better to take that leap then to wonder for the rest of your life, "what if I would have just said"

welcome to pip

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KandyGrl511
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since 11-30-2008
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Michigan


3 posted 03-05-2009 08:30 PM       View Profile for KandyGrl511   Email KandyGrl511   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for KandyGrl511

ok i really really loved this poem!!!!!!

<3 i love u<3

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


4 posted 03-06-2009 12:15 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Welcome to Passions!

Please check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
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KRJ

freeand2sexy
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5 posted 03-06-2009 08:40 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I really like this, especially the way you ended it.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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